Rural & Tribal Library Toolkit | Remix Share-Out ![:cyclone: :cyclone:](https://emoji.discourse-cdn.com/apple/cyclone.png?v=12)
Remix at a Glance |
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PLIX activity you are remixing: |
Spatial Poetry |
Give your remix a name (optional): |
Walking & Remembrance |
What remix strategy did you choose? |
extended interaction |
Why did you choose this remix strategy? How does it address a challenge or opportunity in your context? |
When it comes to working with creative writing, I believe that in order for participants to get the most out of the program (via creative collaboration), the extended interaction model best suits the encouragement of community-building in spaces that participants could learn a lot from, not just from the program itself but also from all the other services our libraries provide. This could include further reading, exploration into art-house cinema—through Kanopy.com, a streaming service we provide to our patrons—as well as independent research on computers. |
Brief description of your remix: |
I chose to remix the Walk Poem prompt, which asks writers to go on a walk, take notes of their environment, and then write a poem about the things they saw. In addition to the original prompt, I decided to incorporate the theme of remembrance or memory. Places hold so many memories, and places can be a gateway for accessing our own histories. As such, I encouraged participants in this test-remix to try to use their surroundings as avenues into their psyche, with literal places as points of departure into their past. |
Number of patrons this remix is designed for: |
4-8. Small groups are ideal for workshop-like environments |
Number of facilitators needed: |
At least 1, but 2 or 3 could be ideal, especially if participants have many questions and would like to discuss their creative process one-to-one. |
Supply Kit
Material |
Quantity (per kit or person) |
A short packet of printed poems about walking |
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(there are articles online with helpful resources, such as this one: 10 of the Best Poems about Walking – Interesting Literature)|1 packet per person|
|Notebooks|1 per person|
|Pens and/or pencils
(pedagogically speaking, there is something about the pen that suggests determination (insofar as it is more permanent than a pencil) and so I prefer to use a pen. However, participants may feel more comfortable with pencils.)|2 pens (or pencils) per person
Activity Prompts
Complete this section if you changed the activity prompt or added a new prompt.
Remix Activity Prompt |
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What prompt(s) did you use to frame the activity for your patrons? |
The Walk Poem Prompt |
(Spatial Poetry)|
Running Your Remix over Multiple Sessions
Session |
Prompt |
General Notes |
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Walk Poem Prompt: Take a walk around your area and write down notable places and street names that you see. Write a poem incorporating these words, in the order you saw them on your walk. |
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Take a walk around your area and write down place names that interest you. It might be helpful to try to write down names that revolve around a theme, such as proper names, nature names, non-English language names, patriotic names, etc.
When you get home, look up the origin stories of a few of these place names. Take a moment and think about all the language you just saw in your area, and what it meant to you. Do these names make you feel included or excluded? Do you see yourself reflected in these names? How do these names contrast or compare to what you saw or felt or heard on your walk?
Write a poem that incorporates each of the words you wrote down in the order that you saw them. Your poem could narrate the process of your walk or be completely unrelated to your walk. Either way, use the poem to reflect on what it feels like for you to live among these names.|The first session would be to introduce the prompt to participants and provide them with example responses to the prompt, as well as to answer any questions they may have|
|2|1st draft|Here, during the second meeting, everyone would bring back their first draft of their walk poems and, if the group is large enough, we could split into groups of two, with each person reading their drafts to one another. Afterwards, we could have people volunteer to read their partner’s poem, unless the poet would like to read their own work. We could ask the poet what things they like or want to change about their poem. Here other people’s input could be useful as well, beginning with compliments and then moving into a more critical conversation of what could work better in the poem (that is, of course, if the writer wants this kind of feedback; one could run this program without critical feedback, only focusing on the positives).
From here, we could all take turns with workshopping each poem.|
|3|2nd draft|After hearing everyone’s feedback, writers would return with a second draft of their poem, ideally having responded to what they heard they could improve upon. This would be a time to mainly show off one’s edits and the poem in its final form|
Reflections on Remix Design and Facilitation
Reflections |
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What went well? What was challenging? |
In first pitching the idea to schools in terms of writing clubs, one of the challenges I faced was the infrastructural organization of said clubs. With spring around the corner, schools were hesitant to undertake such a big project all at once, and preferred to have the library come into the school and build a relationship with the students throughout the spring before pitching the idea of a writing club to them in the fall. In the end, this obstacles was more of a blessing insofar as we will surely be able to garner more interest in these clubs with all the outreach myself and other librarians are doing with the schools. |
What did you celebrate? |
As part of this outreach, a colleague and I hosted a raffle for one of the schools, and as such we celebrated students who finished their assigned work on time. Raffle prizes included book bundles, candy, and a Kindle Paperwhite! |
Which of the PLIX facilitation techniques did you use or think about while planning this remix activity, if any? |
Since this is an extended remix, the idea of celebrating process as well as product is very important to me. I would like participants to appreciate the learning curve when it comes to creative writing, which is why it is crucial to create a communal and friendly environment in which people come together to learn and grow as a group. |
Example Showcase
Untitled by Ken Tomaro
I remember the creek in the park
and the tree with a funny bend in it
we sat on often
I remember
what the principal’s office looked like,
the smell of cigarette smoke hanging in the air
the fort in the woods with big hairy spiders and magazines with naked women
the big green car
the water running through the pipes
Ghoulardi and the Saturday night movie
I fought like hell to stay awake for
the awful Sunday mornings at church
the cowlick in my hair
I remember…
ah, well, I guess some things
even Pepperidge Farms doesn’t remember
Pranayama by Robert Allen
When I walk I count my breath:
In and out and hold. Let go.
In and out and hold. Let go.
Death held tautly on my tongue.
Breathe to fullness.
Release to flow.
Edges are blurred, or walk away
like lazy cattle. Let go.
I walk past
what once was
a restaurant with
full size golden
figures outfront slyly moving
a hip toward the dance.
I could live there with those golden
dancers, swaying in pantomime.
My whole life would be a menu.
It would smell
of soup and noodles
and burn like
scotch bonnets.
I walk on, a library,
some barren tracks,
someone’s tattered American flag,
an auto parts store,
a coffee place, a bagel place,
a trailer park, just waiting
for something to happen.
And it’s me.
It’s so Nice Here by Jessie Peitsch:
When I walk over Burrard and
look at the mountains and
see snow at the ski resorts
I think how can there still be
snow at this time of year and
then I remember there are
machines that whir all winter
to make it happen for us
I wonder if people
come to Vancouver and
expect Canada
champagne powder and
grizzlies we are all talking
about Lululemon and
Yaletown 2 bed 2 bath
on sale for 1.6 mil